It was like some giant had lifted off the roof and dumped in the entire contents of a thrift store.
The huge room seemed cramped and choked by teetering piles of boxes, furniture and other clutter.
Tall wardrobes bursting with clothes, cardboard cartons vomiting sheafs of paper onto the dirty floor, stacks of chairs missing legs, broken toys, soiled dolls.
The house reeked of damp mildew, cat piss, rotting food, spoiled milk.
Basted over everything was a sickly artificial scent I later learned came from hundreds and hundreds of dryer sheets Mrs. Jones scattered over the piles to discourage the vermin.
Sounds delightful!
That’s quite a word picture. Something has to be driving the narrator on
Either she’s from Child Protective Services or a cable show about hoarders!
Couldn’t live like that at all, don’t know how anyone can.
My mother was a hoarder, and I recognize the state of the living a bit…
Dear Josh,
Vivid descriptions had me wanting to retch. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
When did you ever meet my grandma? But, seriously good writing. I’m feeling claustrophobic. Cheers, Varad
Ew.And there are people who actually live like that!
Oh, the dryer sheet line brings it full circle in a delightfully yucky way.
Her concession to normalcy that only makes it worse!
You are describing one of my brother-in-law’s hoarder tenants who left the place but made sure she left all her shit behind… It was so bad, they had to rip out the wood flooring! Nothing could mask the stench… blech!
This is a wonderful piece of descriptive writing, Josh. Could almost be there, though I’m glad I’m not! Brilliant word picture
Thanks, Lynn.
My pleasure :)
Incridibly visual – I almost wish it wasn’t! Nice one.
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How can anyone live in this house? Makes me want to run away.
http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/07/thank-you-claire-sheldon-for.html?m=1
The life of hoarders. Quite…different! Thanks for the imagery! Well done. :D
Wow! Great detail. Did Mrs Jones suffocate one day perchance?
Ewww. Brilliant imagery.
Good writing. I feel sorry for her life.
Thanks. This is actually a reworked excerpt from a short story called Bring A Friend. It was based on an event from my life. Everything described was real. You can read the story here.
Geez…this almost made me gag.
Nice one. I read the short story from the link. It’s absolutely brilliant!
Thanks so much!