The Priest Offers

by , under Fiction Prompts, L'Incarnation, Sunday Photo Fiction

The priest walks around the cluttered work table, drags a finger down its surface and holds it up for inspection. He scowls and wipes it on his cassock, walks slowly up the stairs to the kitchen. He stands before her, hands clasped behind him.

“Listen, daughter. I came to speak to your husband about his reputation. I do not carry gossip, for  I care nothing for the chattering of such birds. No, I speak of his professional reputation. Under normal circumstances I would never trouble a wife with my concern, but you and I enjoy a certain confidence gained by your life in the Church.  I say to you in all candor: your husband is on the verge of losing his good name, if he has in fact not lost it already. My errand today was to offer him opportunity to right the harms his dalliance have caused  the Church. It could be considered a commission. On the other hand, it might be considered a penance as well, for I cannot offer much in the way of financial compensation. It is a chance. Perhaps it is a last chance. So, my daughter, I ask you this: will you not approach your husband with my offer?”

Sunday Photo Fiction

This is an excerpt from a novel in progress about Marie of the Incarnation and  her mission to New France in the 1640s.

  1. Iain Kelly

    Intriguing passage, the priest counseling into the woman’s ear fits he prompt photo well. Good luck with the rest of the novel.

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  2. Joy Pixley

    Great connection to the image, and in intriguing look into your novel in progress. Definitely great tension built in this scene.

    This feels pretty different from what I’m used to seeing from you, both in content and style. Or have your novels always tended more historical than what you post for flash fiction?

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