Protocol

by , under Fiction Prompts, Friday Fictioneers

Friday Fictoneers for this week is a tough one. I stood staring at the picture of the Keck Observatory for a long time.

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The colonel’s blotchy face turned  salt white as he watched the screen.

“Jesus,” he whispered. “Are you sure this is real?”

“Absolutely certain, Colonel. We wouldn’t have enacted the protocol if we weren’t. Both of the telescopes have been tracking it for months. Last night we were able to confirm it.”

“Jesus,” said the colonel again.

“I don’t mean to pry, Colonel, but what now? The protocol only specifies that upon confirmation we notify your office. After that—”

“After that is classified, Doctor.” His jaw was hard, but the eyes looked mealy, soft with ensuing panic. “You can trust your government.’

 

  1. ansumani

    I’m not sure we can trust thhis government. The last line leaves tells a lot yet leaves a lot to imagination. Well done.

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  2. mjlstories

    I like the story but what I like even more is the way you paint this character with the tiniest amount of telling detail and trust the reader to fill in the rest.

    (It’s what Jane Austen does and I think why we love her characters – because we partly create them. Now there’s a theory and don’t expect that you set out to be compared to Jane Austen!)

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