Closing Forever

by , under Fiction Prompts, Flash Fiction, Friday Fictioneers

George greeted me with his usual smile, ushered me up onto the shoe bench as he got out the tin and rag, his long fingers deft and surprisingly unstained.

“You still got any shoes with me?” he said, peering up. “I know I had those oxfords.”

“No, you finished them last month.” I looked at the wall crowded with pictures, framed clippings, awards. George and the mayor, George and the governor, George and the chief of police. Everybody came here for a shine. “How long has it been again?”

“I been doing this seventy years,” he said. “Long enough.”

Friday Fictioneers

This story is inspired by George Manias, who has run a shoeshine and hat cleaning store in downtown Peoria since 1948. Unlike this story, George’s is still open. He wants to make 75. I think he’ll make it. 

  1. Iain Kelly

    Long enough to be assured he will be missed when he is gone. It’s reassuring to have a fixture like that in the crazy world today.

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  2. subroto

    Wow! Nice story but the true story of George in the link was amazing. I am sure there is technology that provides a better shoe shine but it will never have that human touch that George and his ilk provide. I hope he makes it to seventy five years.

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  3. jillyfunnell

    Hi s work has brought him into contact with so many. Maybe just another year more? Lovely story.

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